Only at the end of lifeI will halt,
So don’t try to push me
If I pause!
I usually become speechless
Still I think
Hence don’t try to tear against me
If I am quite!
Events always saddens me,
Who is happy always?
So don’t throw fake smiles,
Just for my happiness!
I don’t know how to cry
as tears are not part of my life
Thus I don’t need your shoulders
Even at peak of glooms!
Still I need an ally
Indeed like you
Just who will be my side?
Till my ultimate pause!!!!!
PARAMVEER SAINI
P.S.: Dil kyun ye mera shor karey....
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin.....teri ho or chaley!!
Great song from Kites!I just love it!!
13 comments:
Are you sad. i felt a bit sad after reading the poem. But it was good. reminds of someone whom you have lost...may be.
sorrowful eh? ending was simply touche!! ...blogrolled yu...! :)
Hary
@butterfly
hmmm...a little bit sad you can say!
xam s are over...so no frns around....resting at home...all blue!!..:(
also i was reading "OF COURSE I LOVE YOU...BY durjoy datta n manvi ahuja"...
i was a lillbit sad in the mid of the novel about the hero!!.....so just written some sad stuff!!
@ hary
thax buddy...hope 2 c you in my space again!!...lol!!..:)
i very much liked this poem ... will be keeping a check on this blog now .. :)
@pretty me
thx dearie for feedback!!.....lots of love!!..:)
Amazing!
Well written.. nice tempo of verses.. and feel was awesome..
Will keep a check on this blog now..:)
Hope you will follow my blog too...
@angel
hey thx for appreciation n so for following me.....lOL
i'l see soon on ur blog
keep coming
Nicely written.. kinda touching.. but it somehow gave me the feeling you were a little bothered about rhythm.. I could be wrong but the next time you write, write freely. You will feel the poem blooming by itself..
@rockfeather
originally i write poems in no particular rythm in my diary....but during editing i ad sthing to make it rythmic......
just coz i think ppl lv rythmic poems more as i think!!
thx for suggestion btw...it matters a lot
hope to c u again in my space
I love poems.
@ana
thx for the add and ur welcome on my MPA!!...Hope u'l have gr8 time here
@ all
sorry for reposting!!....trying something different!..i love this poem. :)
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